based on the revised attached pdf please help with with the corrections

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I have already made the first draft and I have it revised I need help with the corrections. The orginal paper is uploaded as a doc. The revised is uploaded as a PDF.
The topic was:
Select a notable mythological figure such as Athena. Research and report on the different ways in which he or she is represented visually in media such as sculpture or painting. Does the manner of representation change over time? Which episodes from your figure’s life are represented most frequently? This paper should have a diachronic perspective—i.e., examine visual representations from several artistic periods, such as Hellenistic, Medieval, Renaissance, Baroque, etc.
The provided instructions bellow were used for the paper:
-The research paper is to be 1800-2400 words long
– please read the uploaded docs carefully before writing the assignment.
– no plagiarism.
– in the dock there is a way to show you how to source your sources for this paper.
– No fake sources I will be checking the sources and if the writing matches or not.
– credible and English sources only
primary sources as discussed in the doc can be the following
1- Hesiod’s Theogony
2- Apollodorus’ Library
3- Hyginus’ Fabulae,
4-Ovid’s Metamorphoses

5- ,and/or the Bible, as appropriate for the topic
If you would like to use Euripides’ Medea, a perfectly fine translation by C.A.E. Luschnig is available at http://www.stoa.org/diotima/anthology/medea.trans.shtml.
not: other primary sources can be use if they are only credible

 
 
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